Only two of you were here today, but you both rocked!
Great lesson, today! Halfway through your first book, and in only a few months! Practice does make perfect :)
Your first experimentation with song-writing started off great! Remember, every song tells a story, needs dramatic elements, a story arc, and even a surprise ending, both with the lyrics AND music. Looking forward to seeing what the 2nd and 3rd verses might be!